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Oct. 18th, 2011 01:37 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I would have preferred
If he came on eagle's wings
Than for this ransom
How does one of us
Redeem a thousand of them?
Here he is, with us.
The willow branches
The sweet scent of the etrog
Gilad Shalit free
יותר שמחתי
אם בא על כנפות נשר
מפדיון הזה
איך יפדה אחד
ממנו אלף מהם
כאן הוא אתנו
ערבי הנחל
ריח מתוק של אתרוג
שליט בן חורין
אם בא על כנפות נשר
מפדיון הזה
איך יפדה אחד
ממנו אלף מהם
כאן הוא אתנו
ערבי הנחל
ריח מתוק של אתרוג
שליט בן חורין
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Date: 2011-10-18 09:44 pm (UTC)(frozen) no subject
Date: 2011-10-18 11:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-19 01:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-19 03:49 am (UTC)But then, I've been described as "a good liberal in every way, but to the right of Attila the Hun when it comes to Israel."
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Date: 2011-10-19 03:12 am (UTC)And agreed, this is a horribly harsh situation..
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Date: 2011-10-19 03:45 am (UTC)And I don't know if I said it on your LJ, but many congratulations to you and WolfTribe.
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Date: 2011-10-19 01:23 pm (UTC)I'm pretty unforgiving of haikus that don't follow the 5-7-5 rule. If you can extend the second-to-last line by one syllable, so much the better.
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Date: 2011-10-19 02:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-19 05:10 pm (UTC)